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我品尝到了成功的喜悦
篇一:表达做某事成功后开心的作文
我品尝到了成功的喜悦
每个人都有一个童年，而童年都有许许多多的事让人记忆犹新。成功是快乐的，成功是美好的，成功是幸福的。它如一阵风，吹走我们烦恼；它如一颗糖，让人心中甜滋滋；它还如一株花，让人沁人心脾。
记得有一年，我过生日的时候，爸爸破例给我买了一辆崭新的白色自行车。我顿时欣喜若狂，抱着自行车就亲了两口后，还说：“我的宝贝啊！爱死你啦！”一回到家，我就拉着爸爸的手说：“老爸，世界上最好的老爸！带我去练自行车吧。”说完，我俏皮地冲老爸眨了眨眼睛。老爸最终还是经不住我的软磨硬泡，只好答应了。我忍不住心中的喜悦，跳起来大叫一声：“耶！”老爸说：“可别高兴的太早，待会摔了跤，可别哭鼻子啊!”我迫不及待的打断了爸爸的话说:“好了，好了，别啰嗦了。快点走吧！”我拉了拉爸爸的衣袖。到了草坪边的空地，我跳上自行车，可还没坚持一秒钟，就倒了下来，可我还是不服气，又爬上了车，可是，车子又要继续侧倒，这次幸好爸爸在旁边扶住。我沮丧地对爸爸说：“老爸，怎么比我小那么多的小朋友都能骑好，我怎么骑不来啊？”老爸笑到说：“你啊，太心急了，对新的事物，要先学会方法，先从简到难，熟能生巧。今天，我先扶着车子让你骑，先适应下在车子上面的感觉，慢慢来。”在爸爸的悉心指导下，我终于能自己踉踉跄跄地骑一段路了。后来，我一有空闲时间，就去空地上练习骑自己的自行车。有一次，我一个人在骑车的时候，一不小心，狠狠地摔了一跤，鲜血慢慢渗出我的皮肤，一大片的
流了出来，我擦干泪水，艰难的爬了起来，继续骑车，我心想困难吓不倒我学会自行车的信心。为了这个目标，我不怕吃苦。在我辛勤的努力下，终于我熟能生巧，已经骑得很顺溜了。我打心底为自己骄傲，如爬上了喜马拉雅山一样开心，真是难以平复我激动的心情。
成功的喜悦是无比巨大的，成功的喜悦是难以掩盖的，我懂得了，历经风雨才能见彩虹。
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2016高考英语写作考前冲刺卷(附答案)
篇二:表达做某事成功后开心的作文
一、满分范文熟读
好题展示
某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加；请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：
1.该谚语的含义；
2．体现该谚语含义的个人经历。
① A friend in need is a friend in deed. ② Where there's a will, there's a way.
注意：
1.词数120--150；
2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 参考词汇：谚语proverb 佳作熟读
[亮点借鉴]
① 使用定语从句，提升了文章的档次。② but后的分句用了部分否定，使整个句子表达的意思恰到好处。③ 使用了非常复杂的句式。means后是一个that引导的宾语从句；宾语从句又是一个复合句，其中主句为祈使句 never give up，if引导条件状语从句，no matter how引导让步状语从句。④ 使用形容词比较级。⑤ 这个复合句中使用了几个高级词语：confront，enormous和perseverance，足见作者深厚的语言功底。⑥ that引导的宾’语从句中又含有一个as long as引导的条件状语从句。 语言积累
1. be resolved to do sth.决心做某事
好例：He was resolved to do well in the examination. 他下定决心要在考试中取得好成绩。
2. sb. is confronted with sth./sth confronts sb. 某人面临某种困难
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写作攻略
提示类开放作文只提供一个话题或一段提示语，要求考生就所提供的内容展开想象，并按照要求完成写作任务。所涉及的话题包括日常学习和生活的各方面。近几年有很多地区的高考英语书面表达是提示类的开放作文。此类作文不仅考查考生英语书面表达的基本功，也考查考生的观察力、想象力、判断力和思维能力等。行文方式一般为夹叙夹议，先陈述某一现象，继而展开议论，发表自己的观点。写作的关键是立意明确，选材适当，符合试题要求。 满分模板
满分技巧
如果作文是围绕某个谚语警句进行的，则就要求大家联系客观实际来谈谈符合普遍价值观的理解。一般讲来。我们可以从三段着手进行写作：①介绍该名言警句 ②举例说明启示 ③阐述本人理解。 夺人眼球篇首句
1．I will treasure my time，enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.
2．We will have to learn to cope with any possible difficulty.
3．As more and more people...，much attention should be placed on...
随着越来越多的人„，应更多关注..... 韵味无穷结尾句
1. If such measures were not taken, the problem of... would have been more serious.
2. Only in this way can we hope to have healthy development both physically and mentally. 3. In my point of view, we should be fully aware of our strengths and weaknesses and never blindly admire others, as no one is perfect.
好例：The new system was confronted with great
difficulties at the beginning. 这项新制度刚开始就遇到了很大的困难。
二、满分模板巧用
三、话题素材积累 话题 总结与结论
必背词汇
提分句型
1．In short, it can be said that health is more important than wealth．
2．It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3. From what has been mentioned／said above, we can come to the conclusion that only by working hard can one achieve success．
4. In conclusion, we should like to thank all those who have worked so hard to bring about this result. 5．To conclude／To sum up, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy．
6. The results seem to suggest that teenagers are more easily addicted to computer games． 7．Altogether, honesty is the best policy．
8．Now we can safely draw a conclusion that attitude determines everything and details make a difference．
9．It is safe to say that our success depends in our determination and perseverance． 亮点临摹
1．从以上所说，我们可以肯定地得出结论，失败和成功同 样重要。 2. 总而言之，每个懈决方法都有其优缺点。
3．总的来说，出国留学舶好处远远大于坏处。
4．总而言之，旅游是为新的挑战做好准备的最好选择。
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一、高级表达
1．运用名词性从句升级句子
He often comes late and that makes his teacher angry．
→ That he often comes late makes his teacher angry． 2．运用定语从句升级句子
The regulation forced badly-behaved students to wear green scarves，and it raised a storm of objections．
→ The regulation forced badly-behaved students to wear green scarves，which raised a storm of objections．
3．运用状语从句升级句子
I won't believe what he says．表达做某事成功后开心的作文。
→ No matter what he says，I won't believe． 4，运用倒装句升级句子
Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests were present at the meeting．
→ Present at the meeting were Professor White, Professor Smith and many other guests． 二、提分句型
1. When it comes to ... 当谈到，说到或涉及......
He is a man of few words，but when it comes to playing computer games, he will be very talkative． 2．There is no need for sb to do sth． 对某人来说没必要做某事
There is no need for me to praise it. It speaks for itself.无需我来称赞，那是不言自明的。
3．There is (no)difficulty／trouble／point／delay(in) doing...
做某事没困难／没意义／毫无耽搁
If we have finished our work, there is no point in staying any longer; we may as well go home. 三、佳句临摹
佳句1：But for some reason, not everyone in the team is equally accepted and valued.
临摹1：由于某种原因，并非他所有的朋友都投票支持他。 佳句2：Never did he show interest in discussions or after-class activities; nor did he ever raise his hand to ask or answer questions. 临摹2：他从来都不做作业，也不参加任何考试。
佳句3：So, never get used to being ignored. If ignored, work hard to make yourself stand out. 临摹3：任何习惯于被忽视的人都会失去自尊。
四、自我提升空间
五、好题作文感悟
[好题调研]
请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。 Being ignored in a team is a course of frustrating, but what really matters is not being ignored by others but being used to being ignored.
注意：1.无需写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；2.除诗歌外，文体不限；3.文中不得透霹个人姓名和学校名称；4.词数为120左右。 [谋篇布局]
[卷面构思]
[卷面成文]
六、热门话题猜想
Writing 1 不试不知道
Direction：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below．
You never know what you can till you try.请你根据这句话来记叙生活中发生的一件事；并谈谈你对这句谚语的理解。
注意：1.不能写出自己的真实姓名和学校；2.不要写标题；3.词数不少于120。
[范文] I am a shy girl, but I really like singing and am indeed good at it, which of course is only known by myself.
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Last month, there was a singing competition in our school, aiming to pick out the best singers of the campus. I thought it might be a good chance for me to show myself. However, I was so shy that I even didn't have the courage to apply for the chance because I was so afraid to sing in front of my familiar schoolmates. Maybe they would laugh at me or look down upon me if I lost the competition or behaved badly. At that time, my best friend Xiao Yu knew it. She encouraged me a lot and said, "You never know what you can till you try." With her help, I caught the chance and bravely stood on the stage.
Writing 2 走在路上
每个人都行走在自己的路上，有着不同的经历和收获。请你“On my way to...”为题写一篇英语作文，向学校英语报投稿，要求包括以下内容：1.叙述在路上你的经历；2．谈谈你的收获和感想。注意：1.词数不少于120；2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。 [范文1]
On my way to school
As a Senior 3 student, I am punctual for every class but an unexpected thing that happened on my way to school yesterday morning changes it.
It was cold so every pedestrian rushed to their destination, including me. When arriving at the school gate, I found it was 2 minutes before the class began. That was enough for me. I was heading for my classroom when I saw an old man fall down in front of me. Sitting on the frozen floor, the old man looked helpless. Something in my inner heart urged me to help him out without any hesitation and not until his son came did I leave for my classroom. Of course, I was late and missed an important English class but I didn't regret. To be honest, if given another opportunity to make a choice between helping the old man and leaving, I will still choose the former because a world full of love depends on all of us. Only by assisting each other can we enjoy a more pleasant life. [范文2]
On my way to my dream
Every one of us has a dream and we are on the way to achieving it whether the way is smooth or tough.
As a Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my peers that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with what I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Of course, occasional anxiety and pressure did discourage me but with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I made it. I'm clear that I still have a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how difficult it will be, I believe if I persist all the time, I will have it come true next June. As the proverb says,“Where there's a will there's a way.”
上海牛津英语7a期中作文复习
篇三:表达做某事成功后开心的作文
上海牛津英语7a期中作文复习 所需单词与词组：
和某人乘坐…去某地 做某事是怎样的 存在有 玩的开心
名胜古迹
所需句子
1. 上个月我的叔叔和阿姨邀请我去北京他们家过暑假。
2. 我在那里待了两周
3. 我乘火车去的因为乘坐火车更便宜。
4. 飞机更贵但是快得多。
5. 我的堂兄弟们带我游览了北京。（show around）
6. 我们游览了很多名胜古迹，比如颐和园和长城还有天安门。
7. 北京是中国的首都，它非常的漂亮。表达做某事成功后开心的作文。
8. 我们拍了很多照片。
9. 我真的很享受这次旅程。
10. 我期待再次游览北京。（look forward to visiting）
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10个月大 看起来很可爱
好好照顾…(2种) 用来嚼的坚硬的狗饼干 给他喂狗粮 一碗水 一条用来保暖的毯子 带…去散步 和…玩耍 一个用来睡觉的篮子 所需句子：
11. 我有了个新朋友---一条黄色的小狗。
12. 她十个月大，她看起来很可爱，我很喜欢她。
13. 我每天都好好照顾她。
14. 我每天喂她一到两次狗粮。
15. 我给她一碗水喝，还给她用来嚼的硬的狗饼干。
16. 她睡在一个篮子里，我还给她一条用来保暖的毯子。
17. 每天下午我都带她到公园散步。
18. 当我和她一起玩，我们非常开心。 所需单词与短语：
保护…使免受危险 在很多方面帮助人们 帮助警方抓小偷 找到失踪人口 帮助盲人安全过马路 帮助农场上的农民 守卫家园 对狗友善
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5. 如今，很多人都喜欢饲养狗作为他们的宠物。 狗是我们的好朋友，不仅因为他们很可爱也因为他们很聪明。（not only…but also…） 狗在很多方面帮助我们。 他们能保护我们免受危险，还能帮助警方抓小偷。 因此，我们应该善待小狗，并用爱心好好照顾他们。
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存在有/某人有 某人最爱的…是…
擅长做某事 想要（做）某事
他来自…
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我们已经互相写信很长一段时间。 我们有很多相同的爱好。 比如，我们都很喜欢打篮球，因此我们经常在信中谈论NBA. 他是一个好学生，他擅长所有在校的学科。 有时候，我们在信中谈论我们的学业。 我认为我的笔友在很多方面帮助了我。
所需单词与短语：
1. 想成为 2. 我的梦想是成为…
3. 努力学习 4. 练习做某事
5. 在我眼中 6. 美梦成真
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6. 我想想我的爸爸那样成为一名警察。 他既强壮又勇敢。 他工作非常努力并帮助使我们的城市变成一个安全的地方。 在我的眼中，他是一个英雄，所=以成为一名警察是我的梦想。 作为一名学生，我应该努力学习并多做锻炼使自己既聪明又强壮。 我希望我的梦想将会实现。
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1.存在有 2. 一个带有三个卧室的公寓
3. 在郊区 4. 我想要（做）某物/事
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8. 我想要一套我自己的公寓 我想要一套带有两个阳台的公寓。 我想在阳台上种些植物。 我还想要两个卧室和一个大的客厅。 一个大的书房对我而言是很有必要的因为我喜欢阅读。 因此我需要至少两个书架 我理想中的公寓应该既舒适又整洁。 那么我就能在我自己的公寓里享受休闲时光了。
2014英语中考预测作文题目 2
篇四:表达做某事成功后开心的作文
作文一：书面表达（满分12分） 地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救）our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇70词左右的短文参评。 1.重要性：只有一个地球
2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难 3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V. 保护
注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名； (2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数； (3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Save Our earth
We all live in the earth. The earth is our home. We have only one earth. We must take care of it. It gives us the best environment. If we harm it, it will be angry. And then we will have a terrible end. There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.
It’s our duty to protect our environment. So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, reduce the pollution.
Protecting the nature is very important. It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.
重点单词 短语 句子分析：
1.earth 2. take care of 3.give sb sth =give sth to sb 4.environment:环境 If we harm it, it will be angry. （主将从现） harm:破坏 angry:愤怒 Have a terrible end:有一个糟糕的结尾
There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illness.（there be 句型） Problem：问题 pollution:污染 disaster:灾难 illness:疾病 It’s one’s duty to do sth :有职责做某事。（固定句型结构）
Protect the environment :保护环境 plant more trees 种植更多的树 Reduce the pollution :减少污染
Protecting the nature is very important（动词作主语时要用ing形式，祈使句除外，同时谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式) nature :自然
keep our environment clean and tidy（keep sth +adj.) 使某物保持怎么样 tidy 整洁
13. If everyone makes a contribution to protect the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.（if的用法 比较级的用法） make a contribution to do sth 贡献做某事
2014中考英语作文热点话题：低碳生活
现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
提示词语：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse
Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place。
分析：1.be good for 对....有益
2.To help with the environment（不定式表目的）help with sth 帮助某事 Environment:环境
instead of doing sth 代替做某事 4.besides 除...之外，还有 recycle 循环 forget to do sth turn off leave It is one’s duty to do sth 有职责做某事 Simple 简单的 simpler simplest Suggest 表明 reuse 重新利用
As long as possible as much as possible as soon as possible We’d better do sth spend 的用法 expensive:昂贵的
2014中考英语作文热点话题：毕业感想 初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。
提示词语： three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
★ 范文
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I
began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others. 分析:
How time flies! 时光飞逝。
I have studied in my school for three years（现在完成时的应用） Graduate毕业
Be eager to do sth 渴望做某事 share 分享 sadness悲伤 Happiness 快乐 memory 记忆 impress使....印象深刻 5.begin to do sth find---found 6.do well in give up
7.as soon as一-----就 have a talk with sb 8.in trouble 处于麻烦之中
2014中考英语作文预测及范文：保持健康生活习惯 健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出。
信息提示：健康饮食；早睡早起，不熬夜；参加运动，强身健体。
要求：根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
★ 范文
I think healthy habits are very important for us。
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once。 分析：
healthy habits健康习惯 during 在...之间 Eating habits 饮食习惯 build up 增进 增强 2014中考英语作文热点话题：怎样学好英语
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 ★ 范文
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions。
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries。
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well。
分析：
1.be important to sb对某人重要 be helpful to sb
2.Suggestion：建议（可数名词） advice（不可数名词） 3.Tape磁带 program节目
4.as much as possible be afraid of doing sth make mistakes 5.The more ....the fewer
6.We’d better do sth magazine 杂志
7.be good for....对....有益 recite 背诵 diary日记
8.in a word 总而言之 as long as 只要（引导从句满足主将重现）
2014中考英语作文热点话题：我最好的朋友
My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him。
分析：
1.work hard 努力工作 2.do well in ....在某方面做的好 3.be ready to do sth 准备做某事 4.help sb with sth 帮助某人某事
5.than 比较级的标志 pretty well 相当好 6.get on(along) well with sb 和某人相处的好
中考英语作文热点：如何减压让生活更美好 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：
(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；
(2) 我的压力是什么；
(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。
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Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class Students in our class .
Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams。
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem。
That’s all. Thank you! 分析：
1.pressure压力 serious 严肃的 认真的 2.Worry about want sb to do sth
3.all kinds of after-classes 各种各样的培训班
4.at weekends 在周末 have a talk with sb 和某人交谈 5.Agree with sb 同意 conversation 交谈 （名词）
6.necessary 必要的 必须的 solve the problem：解决问题
2014中考英语作文热点话题：幸福
幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是„„ 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确， 字迹工整，80-100词。
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Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to