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2013年6月15日上午 大学英语四级考试作文参考范文
篇一:A,funny,day作文
2013年6月15日上午 大学英语四级考试作文
参考范文
2013年6月大学英语四级考试，考试时间：2013年6月15日上午，考试已经结束。祝参加四级考试的同学顺利通过考试! 2013年6月全国大学英语四、六级考试将继续采用“多题多卷”模式,即在同一考场内采用内容不同的试题组成的多套试卷实施考试，多套试卷之间的难度差异通过试卷之间的等值计算来得到平衡，因此考生的报道成绩不会因其所答试卷的不同而受影响。
参考范文一：
In this picture, we can tell that the son is talking to his father about his concern about the nuclear waste. His father told him that if he can empty the dustbin first, he can do anything. This is an easy but very important story, telling us that we have to focus on things around our daily life first, and then the things great enough in the world.
In our daily life, it is very common to find some people that talk about their great minds on topics that far away from their lives. However, they provide little concern on staffs that around their own daily lives. These people are usually not very successful because their minds are beyond their grasp. To this end, students who want to be a better man, have to know that one can become greater and greater if they can complete things around their daily life well one by one. They may stand on the top of the mountain in the society finally.
参考范文二：
Just as is revealed in the picture above, the young, nowadays, just like the boy in the drawing, are prone to reach for what is beyond their grasp, but ignore the significance of doing something trivial and simple before accomplishing great feats.
There is no doubt that the symbolic meaning subtly conveyed in the picture should be given deep consideration. As we all know, a man who does not sweep a room, doesn't mention to sweep the world. In other words, the foundations of a building must be strong, or else the whole structure will fall down someday. Therefore, when it comes to the key to success, the most important thing lies in doing every tiny thing well around you.
As the saying goes, “the highest eminence is to be gained step by step.” To achieve the goal, not merely do we need ambition; we also need to realize the importance of dealing with triviality from the beginning. Only in this way can we get on the way to success down to earth.
参考范文三：
The picture shows us a dialogue between a father and a son. The son told his father, “Dad, I’m a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste”. While his father told him, “If you can empty the dustbin here you can do anything”. It reveals the importance of doing small things well before undertaking something big. There is also an old Chinese saying to go with this that a person can’t sweep the world before he can sweep his own room.
I agree on the point that it is of great importance for a person to do small things well before undertaking something big. First of all, doing small things well entail the qualities that needed in doing great things such as patience and ability of controlling time. For
example, when we sweep our room, we need to manage our time and energy reasonably. Accordingly, if we sweep a bigger room, for example, a classroom with our classmates, we should learn how to cooperate and allot assignments as well. And a big advantage is that we can draw useful lessons from the failure of performing well because they didn’t cost a lot.
In another word, though these things seem trivial, they reinforce our manipulative ability and thus our understanding to the world. Therefore, we should not ignore the small things.
英语四级作文真题
对白：
子：Dad, I'm a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste（处理核废料） 父：If you can empty the dustbin（垃圾筒） here, you can do anything
北京新东方学校 金凌虹老师第一时间给同学们提供2013年6月英语四级作文真题答案范文。
We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his son. Having
heard his son’s words “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him.
Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before.
2013年6月全国大学英语四、六级考试将继续采用“多题多卷”模式,即在同一考场内采用内容不同的试题组成的多套试卷实施考试，多套试卷之间的难度差异通过试卷之间的等值计算来得到平衡，因此考生的报道成绩不会因其所答试卷的不同而受影响。
大学英语四级考试流程
8：50---9：00试音时间
9：00---9：10播放考场指令，发放作文考卷
9：10取下耳机，开始作文考试
9：35发放含有快速阅读的试题册(但9：40才允许开始做)
9：40---9：55做快速阅读
9：55---10：00收答题卡一(即作文和快速阅读)
9：55---10：00重新戴上耳机，试音寻台，准备听力考试
10：00开始听力考试，之声开始放音
听力结束后完成剩余考项。
11：20全部考试结束。
2013年6月大学英语四级考试
Part III Listening Comprehension短对话1-4
听力原文
Part IIIListening Comprehension
Section A
Directions: In this section, you will hear 8 short conversations and2 long
conversations. At the end of each conversation, one or more questions will be asked about what was said. Both the conversation and the questions will be spoken only once. After each question there will be a pause. During the pause, you must read the four choices marked A), B), C) and D), and decide which is the best answer. Then mark the corresponding letter on Answer Sheet 2 with a single line through the center.
11.
W: What are you doing in here, Sir? Didn't you see the private sign over there? M: I'm sorry. I didn't notice it when I came in. I'm looking for the manager's office. Q: What do we learn from the conversation?
12.
W: Mike, what's the problem? You've known from month the report is due today. M: I know, but I'm afraid I need another few days. The data is hard to interpret than I expected.
Q: What does the man mean?
13.
W: Excuse me, Tony. Has my parcel from New York arrived?
M: Unfortunately, it's been delayed due to the bad weather.
Q: What is the woman waiting for?14.
W: Pam said we won't have the psychology test until the end of next week. M: Ellen, you should know better than to take Pam's words for anything.
Q: What doesthe man imply about Pam?
19. What does the man say about his working experience?
20. Why does the man want to leave his present job?
21. What is the man interested in?
22. What question did the man ask the woman？
Part III Listening Comprehension短对话5-8
听力原文
Part IIIListening Comprehension
Section A
Directions: In this section, you will hear 8 short conversations and2 long conversations. At the end of each conversation, one or more questions will be asked about what was said. Both the conversation and the questions will be spoken only once. After each question there will be a pause. During the pause, you must read the four choices marked A), B), C) and D), and decide which is the best answer. Then mark the corresponding letter on Answer Sheet 2 with a single line through the centre.
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W: Tom, would you please watch my suitcase for a minute? I need to go make a quick phone call.
M: Yeah, sure. Take your time. Our train doesn’t leave for another twenty minutes.
Q: What does the man mean?
16
M: Frankly, Mary is not what I'd called easy-going.
W: I see. People in our neighborhood find it hard to believe she's my twin sister.
作文
篇二:A,funny,day作文
Unit 1
We want some students for our school band. Can you sing? Can you play the violin? Can you play the piano or the guitar? Do you have time on the weekend? If you can and have time, join us! Please call 632-8187 and talk to Mrs. Yang for more information.
Unit 2
My Saturday
I’m Li Hong. I have a busy Saturday. I get up at seven o’clock. Then I eat breakfast at seven thirty. From eight to eleven, I do my homework. At twelve, I eat some meat for lunch. In the afternoon, I play football with my friends from 2 p.m. to 5 p.m. And I eat dinner at 6 p.m. Then I watch TV from 7 p.m. to 9 p.m. at home. I go to bed at nine thirty.
Unit 3
Dear Vera,
I’m so glad to get your letter. Let me tell you something about how to go to school.
My home is 4 kilometers away from my school. Every morning I walk to the bus stop first, and the take the No.16 bus to school. The bus ride takes me 15 minutes. If you study in Beijing, it’s easy to ride a bike or take a bus to school. If you don’t know the way to school, you can ask me.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in Beijing. Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Wang Li
Unit 4
Welcome to the museum. From Tuesday to Sunday, it is open from 7:30 in the morning to 6:00 in the evening. It is closed on Monday. Here are some of the museum’s rules. You must obey them.
When you are visiting the museum, don’t talk loudly or make any noise. Please keep quiet.
Don’t take photos.
Don’t smoke in the museum. But you can smoke outside the museum.
Don’t take any food or drinks into the museum. You can’t eat or drink it.
Unit 5
My Favorite Animal
I like animals. But my favorite animal is koalas. They are small, but they are very cute. They have round eyes and ears. They also have round head and body. They look like bears. I love them because they are beautiful and funny. Koalas often stay in the tree. They sleep during the day, but at night they get up and eat leaves. They come from Australia and they are really lovely. Unit 6
Hi, this is my family. It’s seven o’clock in the evening. Let’s see what we are doing. My grandpa and my father are playing chess in the sitting room. My grandma is watching TV on the sofa. My mother is listening to music on her bed. My sister is talking to her friend on the phone. She is in her bedroom. Where is my brother? He is reading in his room. I am doing my homework at the desk. My sister is only three years old. She is playing with toys on the floor. Everyone is busy.
期中
Hello, I’m Zhang Yu. I can swim and I can also play ping-pong. I like to talk and play games with people. My favorite animals are elephants because they are smart, but I don’t like tigers because they’re really scary. There are many rules at my home. I have to get up at 6:00 every morning and make my bed quickly. I can’t go out or see friends on school nights. I can’t play computer games, either. I must go to bed before 9:00. On weekends, I have to clean my room. Then I have to learn to play the piano. I know my parents make rules to help me. I must follow the rules. But the rules are boring. I’m not happy. What can I do?
Unit 7
Dear Jim,
Thanks for your letter. In your letter, you ask me about the weather in Beijing. So let me tell you something about the weather here. There are 4 seasons in a year. Spring is warm and short. We often play soccer after school. In summer, it’s very hot. And it often rains, so it’s humid. We often go swimming in the river. In autumn, the weather is very dry and cool. Leaves begins to fall. Farmers are busy. They often work in the fields. Winter comes after autumn. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes there is strong wind. People usually wear scarves and warm clothes. It often snows in winter. People often watch TV at home but we like to play in the snow. We often make a snowman and we can have a good time.
Please write and tell me the weather in Moscow.
Best wishes!
Wang Jun
Unit8
Where is the hotel? Let me tell you how to get there. Go down this road, and then turn left. Go across First Ave and Second Ave. When you come into Third Ave, turn right and walk on. You can see a bridge over a river. Go across the bridge. Then you can see the hotel. It’s on your right, across from the post office.
Unit9
My English Teacher
My name’s Wang Ping and I’m in Class 1, Grade7. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher.
Her name is Li Xiao. She’s of medium height and she’s thin. She has a round face, two big bright eyes and a small nose. She has long curly brown hair. She doesn’t wear glasses. She likes whites and she often wears a white coat and blue jeans. She looks young and we don’t know her age.
She likes playing sports very much. And Liu Xiang is her favorite athlete. She can sing very well. She always has a smile on her face. She is kind and friendly to the students. We all like her.
Unit 10
Tel:856-8798
(A) House of Porridge
Welcome to Clark’s Porridge House. We have different kinds of porridge. We have meat porridge and vegetable porridge, and fruit porridge is our special. It is only 4 yuan for one bowl. A bowl of meat porridge is 5 yuan. Vegetables porridge is 3 yuan for one bowl, and 5 yuan for two. We have thin pancakes, too. They are 5 yuan for ten. If you are too busy to come, call us and we can deliver the food to you in 20 minutes.
(B)
Annie, a fourteen-year-old girl, is from the United Kingdom. She lives in Beijing with her parents and now she studies in No.1 Middle School. She likes Chinese food very much. She often has eggs, porridge and milk for breakfast. She has lunch at school and there she has chicken, fish and dumplings. She says all of the Chinese food is very nice and the Chinese people are friendly to her.
She really loves China.
Unit11
A Great Trip
I had a great trip last summer. I went to Xuzhou with my father. It was a lovely day. We took a slow bus. There were not too many people on the bus. We listened to the music and talked happily. We saw many villagers along the road. When we arrived there, we visited the museum first. There were quite a lot of visitors in it. I saw many interesting things and took lots of photos. Then we went to the lake and went boating. It was fun. After that, we climbed the hill. It was high. When we got to the top, I was tired but happy. We bought many lovely gifts there. All in all, it was an exciting trip.
Unit12
A Busy Weekend
I had a busy weekend. I got up early in the morning and played sports. After breakfast, I went out for a walk with my little dog. Then I cleaned the rooms and did some shopping. After that it was 11:30. I cooked lunch for my family. In the afternoon I watched a big football game on TV and then I played football with my friends. At about 5:00 I played computer games with my daughter. We had dinner outside. After dinner we went to the movies. Before I went to bed, I did some reading. I was really busy, but I was very happy to spend the weekend with my family and friends.
期末
It was sunny last weekend. I went to the park with my parents. My home is far from the park, so we took a bus there.
There were many people in the park. They were all happy and friendly. First, we flew the kites. Some people watched us flying the kite and shouted happily. Then my father taught me how to fish. It was really interesting. After lunch, we climbed the mountains and took some photos. After that I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my friends. They were a little expensive.
All in all, it was an exciting day. We were tired, but we had a great time.
高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)
篇三:A,funny,day作文
一. 用词准确;表达地道
【北京卷】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分)
美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。
注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。
Dear Jeff,
I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。
【安徽卷】【试题回放】
假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：
l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。
二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩
【北京卷】 【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【名师点评】
本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
【北京卷】 【试题回放】开放作文
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
【名师点评】
本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。
三. 复合句为写作增色
【全国卷】 【试题回放】
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：
1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。
这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育
好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。
【全国卷II】【试题回放】
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.地点：距白山入口处500米;
2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。 注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single
which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 doubleperson room, of person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
【名师点评】
本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。
评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。
【重庆卷】 【试题回放】
据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括： 自我介绍
得知的情况
表示鼓励
打算为她做什么A,funny,day作文。
祝她早日康复
注意：
1. 信的格式已为你写好
2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Amy,
I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。
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好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠
好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。
好处：which引导限制性定语从句。
2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!
因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!
好处：掷地有声，语言准确。
四. 结构清晰,句式准确
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2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部倡导学生：
u 每天锻炼一小时
u 健康工作五十年
u 幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意：
1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.
In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!
Thank you!
【名师点评】
本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。
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好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。
评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。
好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.
如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。
评析：虚拟语气。
句酷大二上学期英语考试作文
篇四:A,funny,day作文
English Composition
1.While studying abroad provides an opportunity to broaden one's experience, it also presents the danger of negative influences from the host culture. What's your opinion? Is studying abroad is a good thing? State your views and reasons. No less than 200 words.
Studying abr